I have had two DGTs, I wouldn't recommend changing a thing on them except the strings, but that's just me. I would recommend doing that first then decide. My two DGTs did not sound exactly alike so it could be the overall tone of the guitar.
Writing "like I speak" is pretty much what I do since proper speaking is the way I was reared. Spending the past 30 years as a journalist has pretty much cemented my speaking and writing style. What you've just read is what you will hear in person.
The acoustic part -- that was also the P22? What did you record through? I have noticed the P22 acoustic sounds on YT seem more authentic than the P24 acoustic sounds but that's just me. I really like your demo.
I've had it for over a year but this is the first time the light and the timing have worked together for photos. Purchased from Eddie's Guitars in St. Louis, there used to be a YT vid of PRSH playing it in Eddie's shop about a month before I purchased it.
Truss rod cover from Shark Inlay: